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Re: The Mansion Chapter 2
yes you have. Thx :D
Sep 11, 2008 -
Re: My new lyrics: Yellow beast
the yellow beast is a yellow beast.................... :D
Sep 9, 2008 -
Re: Melosica - Chapter 1
If you get this much crit, you know people like ur stories................................................................. No one even reads my own.............................ARGHHHHHHHHHHHHH :D Wel
Sep 8, 2008 -
Re: Avargorn: S.S - Prologue
Calm down up there. We all want to read the book okay. Keep cool my babies *Conan O'brien*
Sep 8, 2008 -
Re: Got his butt kicked in class
that blocke was me on the first grade. BUT NOW I HAVE ALL THE POWER MUAHAHAH :twisted:
Sep 7, 2008 -
Re: My Greates Song Yet!
is it a rap?????? GREAT SONG :D
Sep 7, 2008 -
Re: Love came here to stay
I have the chords ready for it. I have played it on the guitar. I just can't remember the names of the chords I play.... I just play..... *brain freeze*
Sep 7, 2008 -
Re: Death of a hero 3
YUP. Now I understand.... great. :D would it bother you If I would ask the people here to give my stories/poems/lyrics some crits because I have been a bit short ...
Sep 6, 2008 -
Re: One to believe in
In that line I mean to say, that I am for some people, the person or one of the persons they believe in.
Sep 6, 2008 -
Re: Death of a hero 2
NEVER READ ERAGON!!! AAAGH :shock: :shock: Read it... NOW! :smt118 When the next one is out, you can just pm me again and I'll give some crits... OK?
Sep 5, 2008 -
Re: an young School boy's fear
Thanx for the crits. Kiitti :D
Sep 5, 2008 -
Re: Does He See?
Thanks.
Sep 1, 2008 -
Re: The Mansion chapter 1
THX I'm alredy working on the fourth chapter, I'll post them soon
Aug 31, 2008 -
Re: Does He See?
THX :)
Aug 31, 2008 -
Re: Grim Reaper
No problem :wink:
Aug 30, 2008